THE TRIALS: Path Toward Godhood. (warning: MATURE CONTENT)

With the last interlude I posted few minutes ago, the volume 2 is finished.

It wasn't easy. At first I never thought I would write so much. I thought that I would enter the Canon in one or three chapters max. But I wanted to try something different. I wonder if I succeeded? 

Anyway how did you like those two volumes? Your opinion matters because it's by listening to criticism and reviews that I can become a better author.